On the right is my second draft, I've placed these two drafts next to each other to make it easier when comparing. The biggest differences here are my suggested improvements which were the background and the photo of the artist. I chose the bright background as it will help my magazine to stand out and I chose this photo as the artist's facial expression goes well with the sub-heading of 'Young Money's Monster'.
Once again, I went to my target audience sample for their opinion and they suggested I need to:
- Change the background as it is too bright
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