Here is my third draft next to my previous one. The only change I made was my background and I chose red & green as this was not so bright & goes well with the artist's clothes. Although the improvements were done, I don't particularly like the background and I think my front cover has gaps that need to be filled. I also feel that my magazine looks boring, which is the opposite of what I want to achieve.
My target audience suggested that I make the following improvements:
- Change the quote as some were unaware that 'G.O.A.T.' stood for 'Greatest Of All Time'
- Make the cover look more 'exciting'
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